巧借奥巴马演讲稿备考托福写作：确认过眼神，他是自带托福高分范文的大神

很多备考托福的同学，对于写作部分挺头疼的，自己写有困难，背范文又苦于找不到地道的素材。其实，就算看不懂艰涩难懂的科普稿和文风肆意的新闻稿，别忘了，美国还有个自带演讲技能的前总统呢!

奥巴马擅长演讲，他的演讲稿也可以称得上是英语考试的范文。今天要和大家分享的，就是取材于奥巴马早年关于财政政策的演讲，我们逐段来分析下。

以下每一段的分析分三部分，第一部分都是原文，第二部分是根据原文制作的范文，第三部分是该段落的用途。为了保证大家不会有理解错误，力劝大家首先研究原文的含义，然后再使用修改后的范文，绝对能做到事半功倍哦!

原文

What we’ve been debating here in Washington over the last few weeks will affect the lives of the students here and families all across America in potentially profound ways. This debate over budgets and deficits is about more than just numbers on a page; it’s about more than just cutting and spending. It’s about the kind of future that we want. It’s about the kind of country that we believe in. And that’s what I want to spend some time talking about today.

范文What we’ve been debating here in XXXXX over the last XXXXXXXXX will affect the XXXXXXXXX here and XXXXXXXXX all across XXXXXXXX in XXXXXXXXXXX. This debate over XXXXXXXXXX is about more than just numbers on a page; it’s about more than just XXXXXXXXXXXXXX. It’s about the kind of future that we want. It’s about the kind of country that we believe in. And that’s what I want to spend some time talking about today.

用途

超棒的起始段，几乎就是为托福作文准备的。

原文

But there’s always been another thread running through our history -– a belief that we’re all connected, and that there are some things we can only do together, as a nation. We believe, in the words of our first Republican President, Abraham Lincoln, that through government, we should do together what we cannot do as well for ourselves.

范文

But there’s always been another thread running through our history -– a belief that XXXXXXXXXXX正面观点, and that there are some things we can only do together, as XXXXXXXX. We believe, in the words of XXXXXXXXXX, (that through XXXXXXXXX词句可以忽略不用), we should do together what we cannot do as well for ourselves.

用途

用于论证段

原文

Now, for much of the last century, our nation found a way to afford these investments and priorities with the taxes paid by its citizens.

范文

Now, for much of the XXXXXXXX一段具体时间, XXXXXXX found a way to afford these investments and priorities with the XXXXXXXXX paid by XXXXXXXXX.

用途

用于论证或者举例。

原文

But as far back as the 1980s, America started amassing debt at more alarming levels, and our leaders began to realize that a larger challenge was on the horizon.

范文But as far back as the XXXXXX, XXXXXXXXXXXX started XXXXXXXX at more alarming levels(此处写得妙), and XXXXXXXX began to realize that a larger challenge was on the horizon.(写得好有画面感啊)

用途

用于论证或者举例。

原文

To meet this challenge, our leaders came together three times during the 1990s to reduce our nation’s deficit — three times.

范文

To meet this XXXXXXX, somebody do something three times during the XXXXXXX to do something — three times.

用途

用于论证或者举例。

原文

But we have to do it without putting at risk current retirees, or the most vulnerable, or people with disabilities; without slashing benefits for future generations; and without subjecting Americans’ guaranteed retirement income to the whims of the stock market.

范文

But we have to do it without putting at risk current XXXXXX, or the most vulnerable, or people with disabilities; without slashing benefits for future generations; and without subjecting XXXXXXXX(某国家) guaranteed retirement income to the whims of the stock market.

用途

又见奥巴马并列金句!而且模板度超高!

原文

To give you an idea of how much damage this caused to our nation’s checkbook, consider this: In the last decade, if we had simply found a way to pay for the tax cuts and the prescription drug benefit, our deficit would currently be at low historical levels in the coming years.

范文

To give you an idea of how much XXXXXXXX this caused to XXXXXXXXX, consider this: In the last decade, if we had simply found a way to XXXXXXXXXX, our XXXXXXXXXX would currently be at XXXXXXXXXXXX historical levels in the coming years.

用途

绝棒的举例句!

原文

Even after our economy recovers, our government will still be on track to spend more money than it takes in throughout this decade and beyond.

范文

Even after our XXXXXXXX, XXXXXXXXX will still be on track to spend more money than it takes in throughout this decade and beyond.

用途

用于讨论XXXXXXXX的恢复。

原文

A serious plan doesn’t require us to balance our budget overnight –- in fact, economists think that with the economy just starting to grow again, we need a phased-in approach –- but it does require tough decisions and support from our leaders in both parties now.

范文

A serious plan doesn’t require us to balance our budget overnight –- in fact, economists think that with the economy doing something, we need a phased-in approach –- but it does require tough decisions and support from XXXXXXXXXX(somebody) now.

用途

超好的关于经济的论证句!

原文

Above all, it will require us to choose a vision of the America we want to see five years, 10 years, 20 years down the road.

范文

Above all, XXXXXXXXXXXXXX will require us to choose a vision of the XXXXXXXX we want to see five years, 10 years, 20 years down the road.

用途

超好的托福作文最后一段的总结句。