雅思考试当中作文的结尾是非常重要的,一部分头尾可以说是以整篇文章比较重要的印象,因此我们作文在结束的时候,一个高峰的模板可以帮助我们获得高分?
雅思作文结尾:
It is obvious difficult to restrict the movement of people around the world and it is probably foolish to try to stop it. But attempts should be made to redress the imbalance.
在人才流失这个话题上,笔者在最后表达了自己的立场,那就是,这种现象他是停不下来的。但是,我们期待着改变这种情况。让我们比较另一个例子:
All in all, the problem of world poverty cannot be solved by money alone. Nations need to work together on long-term projects, sharing their knowledge and skills so that each person has something valuable to offer their community.
在分析和解决方案主题的最后,我们也可以采用这种双因素结束的方法。如果最后剩下的时间不是很充分,省略对全文的回顾,直接发表自己的观点,也是一个明智的决定。
To conclude, it is clear that although numbers of women in the workforce have increased, they are still disadvantaged because they generally put the welfare of others, particularly the family, above financial ambition or promotion.
在上面的例子中,我们发现,其实对未来的展望,也可以写成对原因的解释, 因为不是每一个话题都能给你一个适合的未来去展望,在这个时候,我们不妨转换一下我们的想法来解释这些观点的原因,这并不是一个好主意。下面我们来看一下这个例子:
To sum up, the richer nations have helped a lot by providing money for poor countries and poorer countries need to not only spend the money for daily use, but also put more money on economic developments, human resource improvements and education advancements, because only by doing so can they change their poor situations.