2018年雅思写作范文及思路点拨:人们的健康由谁负责?

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考鸭们都知道,雅思写作话题有一个历史题库。本文就为大家梳理历年雅思写作真题范文:Some people think governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?——2015年10月10日政府类雅思写作真题

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分析:题目的类型属于单一观点的讨论。话题类型属于政府投资类。这道题题干中提出了影响疾病的两个方面:环境和住房。这两个方面在正文中都要提到是如何影响人们健康的。

范文主体思路分析:

主体段一:环境问题和住房条件确实会影响人们健康,需要政府关注和投资

主体段二:政府充当的只是组织协调者,人们也需要对自己的健康负责,养成良好的生活方式

雅思写作参考范文

There is no doubt that people’s health will be influenced directly or indirectly by the environment and housing condition. Whether governments should focus more on the environment and estate has triggered a controversy. I feel that individuals should take more responsibility for their well-being other than government’s increasing attention.

毫无疑问,人们的健康会受到环境和住房条件的直接或间接的影响。政府是否应该更多地关注环境和房地产,引发了一场争论。我认为,除了政府日益关注的问题以外,个人应该为自己的福利承担更多的责任。

Indeed, the environmental problems and housing conditions are two main sources for illness and diseases. In many large cities in northern China, haze weather has become a daily killer, especially causing respiratory diseases in winter. Also, populace will easily access to viruses and bacteria if they live in a poor housing condition without any advanced sanitation. Therefore, governments should give more attention and higher investment in these two areas.

事实上,环境问题和住房条件是疾病和疾病的两个主要来源。在中国北方的许多大城市,雾霾天气已成为每天的杀手,特别是在冬季导致呼吸道疾病。此外,如果没有任何先进的卫生设施,民众生活在恶劣的住房条件下,他们将很容易地接触到病毒和细菌。因此,政府应该在这两个领域给予更多的关注和更高的投资。

Compared to individuals, governments have more power to arrange a wide range of social resources to address severe issues; however, it does not mean that addressing this problem totally depends on governments. The state is an organizer or a coordinator in our society instead of a responsibility taker. Although governments can claim people to enhance the awareness of environment protection, make policy to strengthen the environment management and invest estate where they need, public health condition is still a personal problem to some degree. People have the obligation to form and keep a healthy and positive lifestyle, or they will still face the threat of illness and diseases even environment and housing condition getting better.

与个人相比,政府有更大的权力来安排广泛的社会资源来解决严重的问题;然而,这并不意味着解决这个问题完全取决于政府。国家是我们社会的组织者或协调人,而不是责任接受者。虽然政府可以要求人们提高环境保护意识,制定政策加强环境管理,并在需要的地方投资,但在某种程度上,公共卫生状况仍然是个人问题。人们有义务形成并保持健康和积极的生活方式,否则他们将面临疾病和疾病的威胁,甚至环境和住房条件的改善。

In conclusion, people can also need to take responsibility of their well-being as governments only hold a position as organizer and coordinator. The most feasible solution may be that governments provide a fine setting on one hand and public should pursue a healthy lifestyle for themselves on the other hand.

总之,人们也需要承担起自己的责任,因为政府只担任组织者和协调者的角色。最可行的解决办法可能是,政府一方面提供良好的环境,另一方面,公众应该追求健康的生活方式。

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