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为大家带来的2015年3月14日雅思写作大作文真题：Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for their children, while others think of other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.本题为教育类话题，请查看范文详情：

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两种观点讨论布局图：

首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

二段：正方观点的展开：一定要有对于细节的展开或例证的支持

三段：反方观点的展开：一定要有对于细节的展开或例证的支持

尾段：再次亮明观点+总结理由

雅思写作大作文范文

Traditionally, toddlers are raised by their relatives such as grandparents in most countries. However, daycare centres have gained a growing popularity among working parents in recent years. From my point of view, attending a childcare centre has more benefits.

传统上，蹒跚学步的孩子是由他们的亲戚抚养长大的，比如大多数国家的祖父母。然而，近年来，日托中心在上班族父母中越来越受欢迎。从我的观点来看，参加一个儿童保育中心有更多的好处。

One obvious argument in favor of daycare centres is that it provides children with the professional childhood education. This is because a good daycare centre is normally equipped with well-trained staff who can impart different skills, such as singing, dancing, painting and storytelling, to children through a variety of activities during the day. In addition to the well-organised, structured projects, toddlers are provided with more opportunities to socialize with other peers, which helps them gain confidence and self-consicousness. However, these opportunities are rare to achieve if they are watched over by grandparents.

支持日托中心的一个明显的理由是，它为孩子们提供了专业的儿童教育。这是因为一个好的日托中心通常配备有训练有素的工作人员，他们可以传授不同的技能，比如唱歌、跳舞、画画和讲故事，以及在白天通过各种各样的活动给孩子们。除了组织良好的结构化项目之外，幼儿还能获得更多与其他同龄人交往的机会，这有助于他们获得自信和自我意识。然而，如果这些机会是由祖父母照看的，那么这些机会是很少见的。

Opponents feel that a relative care is as effective as children centre. The reason for this is that taking care of a child is never an easy task, as children need constant love and attention. In fact, due to the limited number of caregivers, children are less likely to get the one-on-one care. By contrast, relatives, grandparents in particular, have sufficient time to take care of their beloved grandchildren, which also contributes to the family bond.

反对者认为，相对关怀和儿童中心一样有效。这是因为照顾孩子从来都不是一件容易的事，因为孩子需要不断的爱和关注。事实上，由于看护人的数量有限，儿童获得一对一治疗的可能性更小。相比之下，亲戚，尤其是祖父母，有足够的时间照顾他们深爱的孙辈，这也有助于家庭纽带。

I personally believe that no child can become an active and valuable member of any society without intercommunicating with other peers. Therefore, although there are conniving arguments for a relative care, it is better to send them into daycare centers in the childhood period.

我个人认为，没有任何一个孩子能够成为任何社会中积极而有价值的成员，而不需要与其他同龄人进行交流。因此，尽管有一些关于相对照顾的争论，但最好还是在儿童时期把他们送到日托中心。

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