雅思口语话题part2参考范文:犯过的错误

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2018年5-8月雅思口语part2新题预测之:犯过的错误(Describe a mistake you once made),范文为高分考生原创,内容有关:我一生中最大的错误是爱上了一个对生活、爱情和关系完全不同的错误女孩。当我为这个女孩努力奋斗的时候,我还不到17岁。口语水平的提高需要一段很长时间积累的过程,所以找对口语范文很关键。学习模仿雅思口语范文要点有3:1.native speaker的地道用词,2.丰富灵活的动词,3.高分句型并熟练背诵之。话不多说,口语范文自取:


Describe a mistake you once made.

You should say:

what it was

how you made this mistake

when it was

and explain how it affected you.

1.适用考生:全适用

2.主题:爱上不该爱的人

3.故事线:我一生中最大的错误是爱上了一个对生活、爱情和关系完全不同的错误女孩。当我为这个女孩努力奋斗的时候,我还不到17岁。

雅思口语高分范文示例:

The biggest mistake in my life was falling in love with the wrong girl who had a completely different view of life, love and relationship. I was hardly 17 years old when I fall hard for this girl.


Initially, we were classmates and then became friends. In a year I started to feel something about her that was quite extraordinary and hard to explain. I guess people call this 'love'. My whole world started to shift and I was surrounded by a mirage for this whole time. Not a single moment had passed when I didn't think about her. She was the centre and power source of my universe. When I proposed her, she expressed her boundless joys and acted as if I should have proposed her earlier. So far, this is a sweet and innocent love story of a teenager and I was happy to have her in my life.

However, it took me only a few months to realise that she was not serious about our relationship. When she was my whole world, I was her just another temporary boyfriend. The relationship ended in ten months and I was so broken-hearted that I could not concentrate on anything for a while. My parents also knew about it and they were very supportive of me. First few days, it was quite difficult for me to get back to my normal life, study or go outside. I simply could not appease my mind that I made a great mistake and it was like an illusion that I need to come out from soon. However, when I started realising that I made a big mistake by approaching a serious relationship without even knowing the girl genuinely, I started making peace with my mind. I was completely honest with myself and that eventually helped me to get out of the depressive time I went through at that time.

The lesson learned from this mistake made me more cautious about making any kind of relationship and I am happy that I took this mistake as an event to learn a lesson. However, I often feel bad that how someone could be so naive to play with someone's sentiment so cheaply.

友情提示:本雅思口语高分范文仅供参考,口语高分的终极奥义还在于不断积累和练习。高分范文在手,屠鸭说走就走。

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