2018年2月4日托福写作真题解析

2018年02月04日 托福写作考题回忆

综合

阅读：通过给钱来保护森林的三个好处

1.    有利于农业

2.    有利于改善森林周边村民生活

3.  有利于生物多样性

听力：怀疑

1.    森林不能砍伐了之后，世界人口还是在增长，那就需要农民在有限的土地里种出更多粮食，那就肯定会使用一些高产的技术，会破坏环境；

2.    森林的拥有者不是村民，是政府或者地主；给他们钱，他们也不见得会把钱给村民，反而会去投资其他的项目；

3.    应该先给森林分类，有一种森林（此处屏幕上有专业名词出现）就是商业目的形成的，只种单一树木，就是保护了这种森林，也无助于保护生物多样性。

独立

Agree or disagree? It is better for the younger people to take risk and explore new things than the older people.

Sample Answer：

Regarding which age stage to explore new area, people have diverse and even diametrically opposite views. Some people support the view that learning new things enables the old to acquire more new knowledge, like searching the Internet for News. However, if the youth have the courage to take risks, such brave behavior definitely helps them grasp a great many rare and precious opportunities. In the ultimate analysis, I surely support the late opinion that the young man can benefit more from running risks.

When it comes to study, students who would like to take chances are more likely to become more outstanding. As is known to all, juveniles not only lack the practical experience, but also are consumed with curiosity. Undoubtedly, once students choose to learn more extracurricular knowledge through traveling to strange countries or participating in some unfamiliar outdoor activities, one of the obvious benefits is that they are able to learn much more about how to deal with some emergencies and how to cooperate with their team members smoothly. That rewarding experience is truly beneficial for them to learn more distinctive foreign culture and improve the practical abilities. Therefore, students who integrate both the knowledge obtained from the teacher and experience learnt from some challenging risks into the process of study can gradually be more excellent.

Of equal importance is the belief that young employees do profit from taking risks. Specifically, it is conceivable that the young man will get a promotion and a raise by exploring some unknown territories. For example, when a manager assigns some difficult projects, young workers who can seize the chance decisively can communicate with sophisticated clients or negotiate with skilled competitors or cooperate with experienced colleagues who have a high standard to teammates, thus contributing to gaining more precious working experience. There is no denying that because of accumulating more experience and coming into contact with bright workmates, young employees are capable of rising to the challenges in the working place and then achieve success with prepared minds.

It is widely acknowledged that rising to the challenges exerts positive influence on young people’s daily life. To add more details, keeping exploration about what ways to make life more meaningful assists them to widen the horizon since the risks are always filled with obstacles and stumbling block. In order to solve problems, the young will search the Internet for effective information and consult their acquaintances for help, which enables them to obtain more achievements and strengthen the relationship with the families and friends. As it turns out, the more young people are encouraged to try new things, the more colorful their life will become. Nevertheless, to purse some risky things such as starting a new business or keep with the times to learn how to use electronic devices possibly brings quite a amount of pressure to the old people. Thus, it is wise for them to enjoy a peaceful and stable life rather than challenge the elders themselves.

From what has been discussed above, I actually hold the view that taking risks allows the young especially the students and the young workers to gain knowledge and improve competence, and consistently forces them to grow and to be diligent. Without risks and new things, they could not be passionate and aggressive as well as glamorous.

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