2019年1月12日雅思小作文写作真题及高分范文之国企私企的男女工作时间对比

2019年1月12日场的雅思写作考试已经结束，本期的雅思小作文话题是国企私企的男女工作时间对比饼图，原题是：The charts below show the hours male and female workers work a week in government institutions and private companies.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

TASK 1

题目：男女在公共机构(government institution)和私人机构(private institution)的每周工作时长

类型：饼图静态图

考点/写作要点：

分段：主体一段：government(国企)男女工作时间;

主体二段：private company(私企)男女工作时间;

主体三段：男女工作时间总对比.

注意单词的改写 ,如government employees=official workers=officials

关注各图中的极值，要注意使用最高级，以及句型的变换。如：

a. For male working hour in the government, the highest one (accounts for) 30%, which is working over 46 hours per week.

b. 3% of male officials work over 46 hours every week, and it constitutes the highest percentage of weekly working hours.

关注题目中相似的值，如国企里女性工作13-30hrs和31-45hrs的时长相同;

在主题三段男女分别作比较时，可以关注差距/倍数/分数/相似。例如在国企，男性工作每周工作时长1~2小时的有23%，大约是私企的四倍(5%);在国企，女性每周工作时长1~2小时的有36%，正好是私企的两倍。

范文：

The four charts provide information about five different weekly working hours in two social sectors: government and private corporation, based on gender.

这四个图表提供了两个社会部门的五个不同的每周工作时间的信息:基于性别的政府和私营企业。

In government, 30% of male officials work over 46 hours every week, and it constitutes the highest percentage of male weekly working hours. Only 9% of male employees work between 13-30 hours. Also, it is noticeable that both 23% of them work for 1-2 hours and 6-12 hours. As for females, the highest percentage accounts for 35%, which is working between 6-12 hours weekly. However, only 4% of female officials weekly working time is above 46 hours. The other three kinds of working hours are similar (1-2hours, 13-30 hours, 31-4 hours), account for 18%, 23% and 20% respectively.

在政府部门，30%的男性官员每周工作时间超过46小时，这是男性每周工作时间的最高比例。只有9%的男性员工的工作时间在13-30小时之间。此外，值得注意的是，23%的人每天工作1-2小时和6-12小时。女性比例最高，占35%，每周工作6-12小时。然而，只有4%的女官员每周工作时间超过46小时。其他三种工作时间相似(1-2小时、13-30小时、31-4小时)，分别占18%、23%和20%。

In private sector, the highest male working hours is over 46 hours, takes up of 34%. It is worth pointing out that only 5% of male workers work for 1-2 hours. For those working between 6-45 hours, the proportions all take up around 20%. As for females, the highest working hour is 6-12 (35%), and the lowest one is above 46 (4%). Similarly, the other proportions are around 20%.

在私营部门，男性的最高工作时间超过46小时，占34%。值得指出的是，只有5%的男性员工工作1-2小时。对于那些工作6-45小时的人来说，这一比例都在20%左右。女性工作时间最高为6-12小时(35%)，最低为46小时以上(4%)。同样的，其他的比例大约是20%

Overall, the average working hours for male employees in both sectors are over 46 hours, followed an average number of by 6-12hours.

总体而言，这两个行业男性员工的平均工作时间都在46小时以上，其次是6-12小时。

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